I’ve always wanted to be accepted for myself.
Not for what I have
Not for what I do or say.
Not for how I look or dress.
Not for where or how I live.
I want myself to be enough unto itself for you to be able to accept me.
But what is left after all these things are discounted – my age, race, sex, profession; the things I say, write, think and express; the various colours and shapes of my body, body parts, clothing, boots; the things I believe and the things I see as I move through life?
What remains for you to accept when all these things are stripped away?
I’m not sure what the answer is (in words); I only know that whatever it is – that’s what I want you to love me for.
Let me see if I understand. You want to be loved for that which cannot be expressed in words, for using words to describe your essence would impose additional, arbitrary limits on who you are. Or have I misunderstood completely? 😁
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No, I think you’ve just about got it.
Am I mad to feel thus?
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Yay! 😊 No, you are not mad, my dear friend.
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Yay! Can I get that in writing? 🙂
Oh, wait – I already did. 😀
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😁
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Beautiful. People get lost in the external too much.
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True that. 😉
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I think all of us would like that – only they dont know it. Very nicely pointed out!
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मैं एक आत्मा हूँ 😉
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Cool! And interesting – I did wonder when you made the reference to Mt Abu but this is really amazing. Or did you take Google’s help. But even then I appreciate the effort.
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The words came from me, but the Hindi came from Google Translate. 😉
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I love you for being you. With and without all the things you listed. The challenge is to love yourself too for the same reasons 😉
XxX
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Ah, if only I was as clear-sighted as you, Patty. It’s been a bit of a sh*tty week.
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I do have my moments 😉
You know, I was just about to go do something else and thought…nope, I am going to catch up on Roberts post first. Glad I did…sending you a big hug! XxX
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Big hugs right back at you, my sweet friend. 😉
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I very much enjoyed this
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One of these days I’m going to have to learn how to do poetry properly. At the moment it’s just a dump of feelings I don’t know how to process.
But thanks! 🙂
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I’m with you on that one. I haven’t a scooby when it comes to poetry yet it is what I read/f most
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I read somewhere that poetry is the best was invented of expressing / communicating feelings. Perhaps that’s something to do with it.
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*follow
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