If prose is food for the mind, then which parts of the piece of writing would be the protein (the muscle), which parts the minerals & vitamins, and which parts the fat?
I reckon the adjectives and adverbs would be the fat – good in small doses (for flavour) but harmful if in too great a quantity.
A noun would be the protein. Protein builds muscles, which give the body definition and strength. Nouns are the building blocks of a piece of writing.
The verb would be the carbohydrate – the energy of the piece.Β They provide the action and the impetus for change from one state to another.Β A verbΒ is the part of a sentence that moves the prose along.
Vitamins and minerals are for health and repair. The art of rhetoric is all about the fancying up of a sentence to that it persuades the reader to think in a certain way – so you have things like metaphor and simile and allegory that provide powerful images that a reader can relate to and (hopefully) be able to picture cinematically.
Then you get on to stuff that ain’t exactly food, but can be ingested to change the mood of the piece. To bring the reader to an altered state. Hallucinogens do that for a body (and mind), but what is the equivalent in prose or prose? What gives a book a transcendent quality? What is it that lifts a story away from the mundane and into the transformative?
I have some ideas – but what do you think?
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Excellent and imaginative post….I’m going to have to think about your question…thanks for sharing, Mr. Fascinating π
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Hahaha – with a comment like that, it has to be Truly on the prowl. How are you, my dear? π
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I’m great Robert…I took some tine to read quite a few posts this weekend after my month long absence that ended last week….and, of course, I was delighted to find that you are as “present” as ever…..your commitment to writing/sharing is admirable. I trust you are well? π
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I’m pretty good, thanks – a bit warm, but that’s all to the good.
Glad you’re back and … well, I’m just glad. π
Kindness – Robert.
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What about adverbs conjunctions semi colon coma exclamation et al
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That all comes under mood enhancing drugs – for sure! π
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Blimey π³
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Sometimes you are so deep. Have to think about your question
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I think I’m going to take that as a compliment – thanks. π
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Yes, take it as a compliment. Most people are really shallow now
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We’re so deep we swim beneath the streets when others can only drag themselves across the surface.
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Yes, and still I don’t know why you didn’t come down the manhole…..
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I GOT LOST!!!!!! π¦ π¦
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LAME EXCUSE!!
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*hangs head in shame and tries not to giggle*
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Don’t you dare giggle. How could you do this to me? After all these years of friendship… Did I not share my tiffin with you everyday??? This is how you repay me? By letting me down???????
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Erm … are you sure it’s not your cousin, Srijana that you’re thinking of?!
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Srijana? Who is that? Are you m
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Making up names and denying those memories???
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Well, yeah – it’s fun! π
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Srijana? From where did you get that?
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Googled Das and looked for females.
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Wow. Nice!
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Sounds like an ideal way to spend an evening, yes? π
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Why not. Googling weird Indian names. How useful and fun!
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Well, it breaks up the day and keeps it interesting. π
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Sure does. How was the time at the pub with Sherlock, Steven and the Queen?
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It was fictitiously lovely, thanks. π
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Did you mention me????
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Actually, none of them could stop talking about you. I tried to steer them to my interesting life, but it was all about you – how you’re doing at school, how your mom is, what you do in your spare time, how impressive your writing is, what an intelligent conversationalist you are, how you love the work ‘fla’, how your tutorials are going, what a nice phone you have, what a finely honed musical taste you have and what kind of dreams you dream. It was a good night. π
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I know I know. They all love me a lot!!
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True that. π
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Ain’t I great????
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Yes, but I can’t remember why. π
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That’s just because I’m great π
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Something about Flannery O’Connor’s prose has that effect on me…anything that feels like it opens a gateway to another world. Nick Bantock, Rebecca, Mervyn Peake, Charles De Lint, Tanith Lee, Octavia Butler…um, what was the question? *laugh*
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Gormenghast!
(sorry, what else did you say?)
*mumbles off to make a nice cup of tea*
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I love that trilogy! “Oh Fuchsia, you leave me breathing like the drowning man.” https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bbVcP_Mo9nM
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Oh, see – now you go and pick one of my favourite songs from one of my favourite bands. Are you trying to get into my pants or something! π
*crosses fingers and hope her sense of humour is working full blast*
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Don’t worry, I totally lack subtlety and guile…you would know…ahahaha! . I’m just such a nice and friendly person–or trying to be, anyway. *laughs* I love the Cure…finally got to see them live for Wild Mood Swings tour…one of the two big venue bands I’ve seen in concert…
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I saw them at Wembley Arena *thinks* 30 years ago. Hell, how can it possibly have been that long ago?! It was when Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me was doing the rounds I think. Eesh!
How did you find them?
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Ha, I had that live CD once, I think…at Wembley…That’s a good album. How was that concert? Honestly, mine was kind of magical, in a serendipitous sort of way. Went to three of their concerts on that tour. Tampa, Orlando, and some other venue in Florida (will have to look at the ticket stubs in my scrapbook). IT’s kind of a long story to post up in a comment. But we did get to meet them after the shows (kinda by accident after the first show). They were really nice.
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English guys are always nice. π
But seriously – WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(the concert was awesome!)
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That they are…generally speaking! It must have been fabulous…to see one of their earlier albums! Totally envious (in a good way)! The only thing better would have been to see one of their “secret gigs” at a smaller venue… π
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Okay, this might sound a little cheesy. Before we met them, or even before the concert, I almost didn’t want to go see them. For things like that, I like to maintain the illusion…and the Cure’s songs have long been a muse (especially when I was a little girl)–a source for magical and creative inspiration. And also, like music in general, a support system during difficult times. But my experiences at the concert actually verified (even for this skeptic) that the imagined magic I associated with the was actually kinda real. One of the experiences I had was so phenomenal that not only I felt it, but all the concert-goers that were standing around me in the audience. Everything was really serendipitous and amazing–beyond even my expectations. I still can’t explain some of the events that happened.
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Ah, I wish that I’d been at that concert now. The only thing that I really remember about mine is that there was this girl that I wanted to take to it with me, but I was too scared to ask properly.
That’s an amazing story – no wonder you remember it so clearly. π
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Ah, maybe you should have. (White roses, and U2 tickets, for my birthday. I still have that memory in my mind’s nostalgia book.) Maybe you’ll see her in a next life?
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I guess she’s still in this life, but the moment has passed. π
What a wonderful person you have in your life to be giving you such lovely gifts! π
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Well, that was once upon a time. LOL That moment passed, too. π
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~this too has passed~
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Did you save anything from the concert…ticket stubs or anything like that?
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Just the memories.
Actually, saying that – I might have the programme (or something like that) in a box upstairs. I also have the limited edition version of the album on vinyl in orange (or was that the 12″ version of the single?) I have loads of limited edition Cure stuff. I was quite the collector I suppose.
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Aw, man. Don’t make me regret passing on my Cure vinyl collection, now. Cool that you held on to yours!
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Thousands of records in the attic, All kinds of Indie/Goth/Post-punk stuff. I don’t even have a working record player!
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Aww…you can still buy them, these days!
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I know. I could get myself a USB keyboard and transfer them to my laptop and then my phone. I could listen to the songs that time has forgotten and YouTube has never even heard of. π
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Exactly. A family member puts songs on mp3s etc for me from their vinyl collection. I still miss the old-fashioned mix tape, though. A mix CD or an online mix is just not the same. Like the main character in High Fidelity, I feel there’s an art to making a mix tape.
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Love that movie! Totally! π
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*grabs a nearby portal and takes up secret residence in attic*
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Hahaha – I should get around to doing something with them. π At the moment they’re chatting with my comics collection.
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I think, just like what makes the body unique, it is the soul who comes up with the story.
XxX
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I have the feeling that the story comes from even beyond the soul. Is there such a thing as a collective soul?
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Yes, it’s called a cult/sect. Better stick to your unique soul π
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Okay – that’s good advice. π
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Pheeeeewwwww…you’re not part of a cult, haha
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Erm … did you think I was? π
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Well, I remember a funny photo of you (I assumed it is you; red band around the head and funny hair) and thought….hm, was he a hippie? hahaha But part of a cult…nope π
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No – that was a Christmas Party Hat! π
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Really? I could have swore that you looked a bit like a hippie-Rambo !
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It came out of a Xmas Cracker. I pulled it down over my face and then pushed it back up so that my hair stuck out of the top. π
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Well, it looked funny! Going to wish you a wonderful evening and sending you a big hug, XxX
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Hope you had a wonderful evening too, Patty. π
~hugz~
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I agree 100% You’ve inspired me tonight! Check out my poetry if you can, I’d actually love your opinion!
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Pah – I have no skill when it comes to poetry. I’ve never studied it. Any opinion I give may as well be the raving of a madman! You sure now? π
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