Once upon a weekend time
There lived a mouse inside a rhyme.
He didn’t like to run and roam
And so he mostly stayed at home.
One day there came a rat-tat-tat
Upon his door – as smart as that,
And when he opened up that door,
He found a gold piece on the floor.
The coin was huge and he was small.
To pick it up required his all.
And as he stood, it all went black.
It crushed his skull and broke his back.
The moral of this sorry tale
Is that – at home, you might be hale,
But if by chance you turn out rich,
Don’t jump for joy – ’cause life’s a bitch.
(This is a nursery rhyme for C White as promised on my post: Challenge.)
This is very good. You write good poetry , Robert.
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I wish! But if you say it is good, I will agree with you this time. 🙂
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Thank you for agreeing.
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Hahaha – you’re welcome. 🙂
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😎😎😎 what a moral! And yes, life is a bitch…. Lovely poetry man! Amazing
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Definitely a compliment! Thanks for the sunny smiles. 🙂
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That poem made me smile. A big message conveyed through a small, cute poetry
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So you don’t think I should try to tone it down for the toddlers?
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No. It’s good and true as it is. I like it this way.
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Me too, actually. 😀
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Specially the last line 👏👏👏
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My fave! 😀
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With my favourite word 😂😂
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What, joy?! 🙂
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You which one. The one I love to call the people who hate me 😂😂😂
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I know that one too.
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Sorry, it should be “you know which one”. Mistyped.
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I do. 🙂
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This is really good, although I’m sure death is not a popular theme in nursery rhymes… On that note, if you ever find yourself unemployed, don’t turn to nursery rhymes. No parents wants their 4 year old saying “life is a bitch” 😂😀
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You got to be kidding – death is a major theme in nursery rhymes! Jack and Jill, Three Blind Mice, Ring a Ring a Roses, Oranges and Lemons, Ladybird Ladybird (Fly Away Home), Rockaby Baby and Mary Mary Quite Contrary (Silver bells are thumbscrews; cockleshells were attached to the genitals and maids where a device used to behead people.) These all feature death and dismemberment! Anyhoo – sorry you disapprove. Life’s sometimes … like that. 😉
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Ha! I was just talking to someone in Austria about the grim themes in certain nursery rhymes. Not only limited to English ones!
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You should tell C White! I think I disappointed her terribly. 😦
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Lol congratulations, you just ruined the innocence that I’ve always seen in nursery rhymes. Though I don’t know some of the rhymes mentioned, I’ll YouTube them. And I don’t approve, it’s a great piece! It expresses the sometimesiness of life
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So sorry. 😦
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For what? I know not what you’re sorry about!
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Well, offending you really. That ‘nursery rhyme’ was ill judged of me.
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Noooo, not at all. Don’t get your panties (underclothing) in a bunch. I was just messing with you, that’s all 😅😛🐱
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Who’s to say I don’t like my panties like this! 😉
*wonders if he’s gone too far this time*
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😂 😂 😂 that is legitimate point!
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😂 😂 😂 You’re cute and cool, my friend. (and I still don’t even know your name!)
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Hahaha my real name? Peela. That’s what everyone who isn’t Swazi calls me. Say it with me, Peeee-Laaa. Peela. Peela! That’s right! 😅
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May I be allowed to call you Peela, Peela? 🙂 *with his best polite voice*
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Why of course, Robert! 😊
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Why thank you, Peela! 🙂
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Good night, Robert. I have a human activity tomorrow, Peela has to wake up all bright eyed and bushy tailed!
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Sleep well. 🙂
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You too, Robert 😊
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Man. Realism in poetry, huh?
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True that. 🙂
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What a cheery ditty. I’m afraid I can’t share it with the grandkids, but maybe an adult book on nursery rhymes — and that could be quite the book! 😉
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I wonder if I could do anything to tone it down … what rhymes with bitch?
blitch, britch, britsch, chich, chiche, clich, crich, ditch, ditsch, fiche, fitch, fitche, flitch, fritch, fritsch, fritsche, fritzsche, glitch, gritch, hitch, ich, itch, kiche, kitch, kitsch, klich, knitch, krych, lich, liche, mich, miche, mitch, mitsch, nichd, niche, nitsch, nitsche, nycz, piche, pitch, pitsch, pritch, quich, quitch, riche, richs, ritch, scritch, sitch, skitch, smitch, snitch, stich, stitch, strich, switch, titch, trich, trich-, triche, tritch, tritsch, twitch, which, wicce, wich, wiche, witch, zich …
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Nope, it’s perfect the way it is!
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😀
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Dark humour – my favourite kind!
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Cool poem. Nice subtle humour.
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As subtle as a sledgehammer. 😀
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